In many countries there is a widening gap between the rich and the poor. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Gap
Add an article
The gap
show examples
between the rich and the poor is widening in many countries. Unfair
division
Use synonyms
of income causes
this
Linking Words
gap. Income should be equally shared in the countries with the widening gap. Many reasons can be listed for
creation
Correct article usage
the creation
show examples
of
unfair
Add an article
an unfair
show examples
division
Use synonyms
of wealth.
Value
Correct article usage
The value
show examples
of money drop more each day
as a result
Linking Words
of wrong politics, and asset owners become more rich and poor
becomes
Change the verb form
become
show examples
poorer. Corrupted politicians and government
officials
Use synonyms
steal from peoples
ownings
Correct your spelling
owning
awnings
owners
.
Price
Correct article usage
The price
show examples
of products raise
as a result
Linking Words
of inflation and drop
purchasing
Change preposition
in purchasing
show examples
power. Low wages and salaries force people to be poorer. Cheap and
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
show examples
products are being bought by the people on low wages. Demand
on
Change preposition
for
show examples
cheap products
force
Change the verb form
forces
show examples
manufacturers to produce cheap and inferior. Consumption of less and cheaper minimize the economy of a country. Solution for non-equal
division
Use synonyms
of intern revenue is based on checking spendings of government
officials
Use synonyms
and politicians. Non-influenced and autonomous central banks should be created. Central banks shall debase inflation to raise
value
Add an article
the value
show examples
of
currency
Add an article
the currency
a currency
show examples
. Courts may judge corrupted government
officials
Use synonyms
. Consideration of minimum salaries and wages should be done. Spendings on technology and technology production should maximise.
Maximisation
Correct article usage
The maximisation
show examples
of technological
production
Replace the word
products
show examples
will grow the intern revenue. Factories may be
build
Wrong verb form
built
show examples
to create job opportunities and less importation. In conclusion, many reasons can be listed for the
division
Use synonyms
of unfair intern revenue.
Such
Linking Words
as wrong politics and corrupted governments
officials
Use synonyms
. Inflation may be another example
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
it.
Formation
Correct article usage
The formation
show examples
of more factories and more spending on technology will fix
this
Linking Words
problem.
Submitted by senayx on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: