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exhausted water resouces from many countries. Discuss this opinion and give your solutions

#water #resouces #countries
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In recent times many countries are experiencing a scarcity of
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 supply for a number of reasons.
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 essay will discuss, why
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 supplies are being exhausted and ways to fix
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 issue. To start with,
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 exhaustion can be caused by a number of reasons. For one,
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 exhaustion can be caused by overusing it.
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 could mean,
people
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 showering more than twice a day.
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, a friend of mine showers before going to work and when he gets back from work while still planning to go to the gym where he sweats afterwards and showers again before bed.
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,
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 could lead to
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shortage
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 because of improper use of
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.
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, there is a
shortage
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 of
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 because the increase in demand for
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 has grown and the resources to meet these demands are limited.
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 is so because the rise in
population
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 is constantly increasing without preparation to meet the demand of the growing
population
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.
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, China is one of the fastest-growing populations which posed a huge crisis because there were no provisions made for the growing
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 and in
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 case
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.
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, in order to ensure that there is
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shortage
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 measures need to be put in place.
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, providing educational awareness to the community on the usage of
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.
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, providing
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 to the
population
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 will create a sense of awareness when using
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.
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, the government should provide measures
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 as artificial dams that can cater for a growing
population
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 which in turn reduces any cause for alarm about
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shortage
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. In conclusion,
water
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shortage
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 is a major problem because
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 is used to do a lot of things,
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, house chores, cooking, fertilisers for crops, and many more.
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, it is important that measures are put in place to fight the impact of
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shortage
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