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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#year #languages #people #life #world
Some
languages
 die out every year in the
world
 because people more than prefer their
mother
tongue
 as well as
English
.they don't use
another
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another language
other languages
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languages
 is going apply outside they more prefer in the
English
 language.i my opinion I agree life will be easier if there are fewer
languages
 in the
world
. According to the statement every year several
languages
 die out.some people think that in not important because life will be easier if there are fewer
languages
 in the
world
.in my country using apply many
languages
 because every state more prefers to
mother
tongue
 as well as
English
 they don't prefer the other own it.
example
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your
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you're
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 going to outside the other continent
your
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you
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 don't
learning
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 about anything relative
it
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to it
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 continent because everyone
speeking
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speaking
English
 as well
mother
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as mother
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tongue
.we are visiting every city, every state ,and every district and if you need to learn every language you prefer more times than it while it is not more important. Whole
world
 more than prefer using
English
 like they printed books,newspapers and
singbord
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signboard
springboard
 in
English
 because now
world
 number 2nd more usefully
English
tongue
.you see every place in own country government printing everything
mother
tongue
 but as well as they printing only
English
 . In my conclusion people more than
prefer
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preferring
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mother
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their mother
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tongue
 as well
English
 because it is
second
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the second
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 opportunity in the
erth
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earth
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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