Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Producing
toys
for
children
has roots in the ancient world because humans had recognized the values of those for kids. Nowadays, there are a diversity of
toys
that are categorized in various functions. Some people conjugate a large budget to purchase many
toys
for their
children
;
however
, in my opinion,
this
matter has benefits and drawbacks that can affect a variety of parts of
children
’s character. What will be discussed below are the advantages and disadvantages of having playthings and some points which parents should pay attention to them when buying
toys
. One of the main benefits associated with improving
creativity
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the creativity
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and practical abilities of
children
.
For instance
, some playthings
such
as puzzles or Legos have
vital
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role
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harmony between imagination and hands power.
Furthermore
,
toys
can be a successful alternative for some electrical equipment
such
as
tablet
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tablets
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and game consoles which have
negative
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effect
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effects
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in
long
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the long
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term and short term.
On the other hand
, when
children
have access to many
toys
,
this
leads to lessening their outdoor activities that can influence their social communications and functional capabilities. Another convincing explanation is cultural issues.
For example
, some
toys
which came from western culture threaten social background and cultural values in other countries
such
as Asian and African ones where people pass on their valuable heritage to future generations with traditional
toys
and local plays. As shown above, there are a large number of benefits obtainable in having
toys
,
such
as enhancing creativity and preventing negative impressions of electrical playthings.
Nevertheless
, cultural and social issues are
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a common
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problem, which deserves people's attention. Parents can regard to them by balancing between cultural considerations and providing entertainment for
children
.
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