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School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Nowadays many institutes around the world are focusing on teaching at least
one
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language
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 as a compulsory subject of their curriculum. Some argue that forcing students or making it mandatory to learn another
language
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 at
school
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 is not a good idea. Personally, I do not tend to agree with
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 statement and in
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 essay, I will explain why I think that the benefits of learning a new
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 at an early
age
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 at
school
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 abound and they should continue to do so. Proponents of the idea that institutions should not make a foreign
language
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 compulsory have some definite reasons for their argument.
First
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 of all, they think that
children
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 should be given a choice if they would like to learn a new
language
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 than indigenous
one
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 because,
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, they can lose interest in studying and cannot focus on their general syllabus. According to them, getting to know their own
language
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 is crucial than another
one
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 because in
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 way they can concentrate better on a particular
language
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 and will not get confused between the two, which can be true to some extent. Learning a new
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,
however
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, at an early
age
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 can be very beneficial because by starting early,
children
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 can get command of the
language
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 as they grow older. Undoubtedly, it will help them to avail many opportunities in their later life which will not be the case if they only know their own
language
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. English,
for instance
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, is now recognised as an international
language
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 and it is a mandatory subject in many schools in Pakistan as they know the importance of making
children
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 aware of the subject at an early
age
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. So later on if they know
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 foreign
language
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 better, it can help broaden their horizons.
Moreover
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, teaching another tongue in schools is
also
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 vital because
this
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 way many languages around the world, which are on the brink of extinction can be saved from wiping out. It has
also
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 been approved by many studies, that
children
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 at an early
age
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 can handle and learn more than
one
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language
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 quite conveniently. In conclusion, there is some truth to the notion that it is not good to force students to learn a foreign
language
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 if they are not willing to do so, if we look beyond the tabloid, it is clear that the benefits of learning a new
language
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 other than your local
one
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 at
school
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 are plentiful. So, in my opinion, there is no harm if
school
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 make it compulsory for
children
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 to learn a foreign
language
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. . ,
Submitted by dr_nighat2011 on

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