Your neighbor has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: - explain the reasons for the noise - apologise - describe what action you will take. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Warner, I am writing to apologise for the noise from our flat. I received your letter about the problem you faced and I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused. Actually, I have started a new hobby of learning guitar. So, I have hired a private tutor for the same. As you know I work from morning 8 am to evening 6 pm during the week, I only get time in the evening to learn anything.

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, I did not realise that it will create a nuisance for you as well as for other neighbours. I am so sorry for all the trouble. After your letter, I discussed it with my tutor and we have decided to continue classes at his place. In

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way, I do not have to stop pursuing my hobby and

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, it will maintain peace on the premises. I am sending a box of chocolates with

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letter, please accept my sincere apology and I really hope that

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problem will not damage our relationship. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Aviral Seth

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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