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film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have no little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development

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In our contemporary life, many film stars and celebrities usually show their thoughts about public
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 unrelated to their profession. While it can be argued that
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 trend brings us a lot of benefits, there are some people who strongly advocate that it could have a harmful impact . In my point of view, it is a positive development.
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 of the idea that sharing views about public
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 person is a positive trend.
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, Film stars and celebrities are very influential and have a lot of fans.
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, when they share views issues, these issues will be received a lot of attention in the
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. The LGBT
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 in Vietnam was previously not recognized and they often received criticism from everyone. But in recent years, thanks to the fact that Miss Huong Giang became the champion of the Miss International transgender contest and expressed her thoughts about the LGBT
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, people have paid more attention to
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 and gradually respect them. Another reason why the opinion of public figures is important is that many of them are well-educated and have broad insight regarding social problems. Sometimes, their ideal to solve the issues are often taken by the government as a consideration in dealing with the crisis in societies.
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 shows that these famous individuals are
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 capable to make positive contributions in solving public
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 dealt with by the country. In conclusion, film stars and celebrities often share their thoughts about public
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 a positive development. There is no denying that their voice has a big influence on people’s
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