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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Learning a new
language
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 is one of the most common ideas that comes for many
people
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 as it is useful for learning and continuing their studies after graduating from university. Some students think that decreasing the
languages
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 over the world might make apply life much easier. And others
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 may claim that the variety in
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 applied will develop communication skills. In my opinion, I personally believe that having less number of
languages
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 is showing more advantages than disadvantages. Generally, the number of unemployment is increasing over the world. Students who graduated from the schools in terms of continuing their study most of them seek to learn and enhance English
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 and spend their money and time in studying different level and subject depend on their knowledge.
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, drops of various
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 might be helpful and much comfortable as it will save time.
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, decreasing
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 aid to utilize that all of the
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 speak one
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 and make the life better.
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, there are several advantages for the number of different
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 not only for the economy of the countries but
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 for cultural aspect. Many countries prefer to have a special way of talking with each other like a team or group.
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, business
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 would prefer talking their own
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 as it helps them in jobs and gain money. In conclusion, drops in the
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 could be a result of saving more time and money.
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, many
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people
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 face obstacles to getting jobs because of the level of their
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.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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