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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical aplliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housheholds in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical aplliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housheholds in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The plots illustrate the changes in ownership of electrical machines and
amount
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the amount
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 of time that was spent on household chores in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, from 1920
a
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the
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 number of hours of
houswork
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housework
 per week was decreasing almost every year until 2019.
In addition
, using washing machine and refrigerator in
household
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the household
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were
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was
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 up to 100
percentage
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per cent
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,
while
 applying a
washine
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washing
 machine had a maximum which is about 70
percentage
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percent
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. To be more exact,
a
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the
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 number of hours of housework per week, per household fell significantly by 30
percentage
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per cent
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 in
1960
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the 1960
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 year.
Then
, it had
slight
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a slight
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 drop which is
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a deacrese
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deacrese
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decrease
 of 10%.
According to
 the chart, from 1920 the
percentage
 of a vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 rose sharply by 1960,
meanwhile
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,meanwhile
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 the fraction of a
washine
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washing
machine
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machines
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 slowly increased by 30%.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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