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. In many countries, the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years. Why is this happening? Is this a positive and negative development for society?

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Considering
intensified
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the intensified
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 competition in job markets ,there has been a
dramatical
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 rise in those who tend to lead an independent life.
Accordingly
,
people
 are more
skillful
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 and knowledgeable , which implies the positive movement Many jobs are not available though graduates have
higher
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a higher
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degree
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, which means they need to acquire a plethora of specialized information and vocational training. In simple words, self-reliance motivates them to willingly engage in study and force
to
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 achieve bodacious results.
Therefore
,
people
 can not only enhance pragmatic skills but
also
 frames themselves
in tolerance
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 that
know
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knows
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 how to deal with particular situations. A salient example can be seen in independent
creavity
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creativity
 that make them a powerful asset for the employer or to their business. Briefly,
people
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who favor
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favor
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 living alone are climbing quickly.
Although
 many
people
 argue that independent life is attributed
from
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to
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 selfishness, it still presents
advantageous
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 for family and society. Those who isolated themselves from working together in order to decrease the burden they place. If being capable of meeting their own needs with the help of technology, they don’t have to depend on others for help.
Instead
 of being a burden, they lighten the load of others. Whether living independently
rising
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 remain positive or negative, it benefits both individual and society. While it allows us to live the way we
love
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live
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, it
also
 hurt mental illness
such
 as stress, depression…
Nevertheless
, as human being alters promptly,
this
 lifestyle is
foundation
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the foundation
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 to earn bodacious things.
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