In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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two or three decades, crime rates have been decreased dramatically than ever before.
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of folks being less safe especially
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countries.
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for small scale industries in order to reduce the
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does not mean being a safe and secure life.
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and lack of
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the main causes of
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to reduce the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • availability heuristic
  • media coverage
  • misinformation
  • urbanization
  • community cohesion
  • justice system
  • economic inequality
  • community policing
  • media literacy
  • surveillance
  • swift justice
  • social cohesion
  • neighborhood watch
  • deterrent
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