In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Over the
last
two or three decades, crime rates have been decreased dramatically than ever before. However
, some nations folks are being less security rather than ever before due to two main reasons such
as redundancy and lack of army
force
. There are some possible measures to tackle this
issue, in this
essay discusses briefly for the following reasons.
Nowadays people feel less safe because they face so many other problems regarding to
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hope
. Being Replace the word
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redundancy
is one of the primary Replace the word
redundant
cause
of folks being less safe especially Fix the agreement mistake
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third-level
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For example
, India faces unemployment
issue
due to Fix the agreement mistake
issues
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overpopulation
over population
in order to Correct your spelling
overpopulation
this
country people always think they are being less safe and they do not feel about the crime rate
. Another cause is that lack of army
force
can be created less hope among the population because Correct your spelling
maybe
may be
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other territory
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another territory army
other territory armies
army
will be attacked, hence
, the population are being less safe and security
.
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, there are some possible actions should
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that should
this
problem. One of the primary sloution
is that the Correct your spelling
solution
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should be created more job opportunities and they should be given Correct your spelling
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zero interest
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for small scale industries in order to reduce the Fix the agreement mistake
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unemployment
rate
. For instance
, South africa
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unemployment
rate
. Another possible remedy is that the government should be increased to their's army
force
, thus
, the public might be felt safe life.
To conclude, Having low
crime Correct article usage
a low
rate
does not mean being a safe and secure life. Unemployment
and lack of army
force
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the main causes of Change the verb form
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this
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and Correct your spelling
opportunities
army
force
is the possible soultions
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solution
of
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this
issue. I hope this
remedy will helpful
to reduce the Replace the word
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fearness
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fearless
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