in some countries, governments are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas out side the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the
last
two or three decades, companies have been starting in regional
place
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enormously. Some nations
authority
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are being motivated to start a business and
comapnies
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companies
in
out side
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of the
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metropolitan
cities. I think that
this
trend has more
benefits
than drawbacks and
this
essay discusses briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are so many
benefits
of starting
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industy
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industry
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outside
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outside
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urban
place
. One of the main advantages is that increasing the job opportunities in regional
place
fokls
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folks
in order to might be reduced the redundant ratio and people who living in regional location livelihood might be increased due to more job opportunities available in regional locations. Another benefit is that air pollution and traffic can be reduced in urban when the companies can be moved
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regional
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venue
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,
as a result
, not only improves cities but
also
develops regional
venue
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by starting a business in these kinds of places.
However
, there are some drawbacks
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this
trend. One of the primary disadvantages is that regional
place
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might be
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polluted
by a lot of toxic
chemical
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spread
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in
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and water,
as a result
, might be affected in farming
land
.
For instance
,
Tamilnadu
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state of India has been suffering many toxic chemicals are added to the farming
land
and drinking water sources,
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waste
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land
rate increases dramatically. Another disadvantage is that these kinds of area congestion will be increased because a heavy truck vehicle always comes and goes on the road. To conclude, companies and industries should need for people survival purpose. Increasing the job chances, rural folk's livelihood and big cities traffic might be reduced is the
benefits
of
this
process. Affecting the farming
land
by industry
releses
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releases
toxic chemical and heavy truck always comes and goes on regional
place
maybe traffic increased. In my opinion, about
this
,
this
trend has more
benefits
than drawbacks, I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy and happier society.
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  • decentralization
  • rural development
  • urban congestion
  • sustainable growth
  • economic revitalization
  • infrastructure
  • urban sprawl
  • quality of life
  • innovation clusters
  • skilled workforce
  • wealth disparity
  • cultural enrichment
  • relocation incentives
  • regional prosperity
  • environmental impact
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