Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and resturants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Nowadays, some
countries
have passed laws against smoking
tobacco
in public buildings, but on the other side, some
countries
believe
that is
a personal choice.
This
essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those people who support smoking
tobacco
in social places, believe that
this
is a personal choice, and It is their body and it does not harm anyone. They are accustomed to the delight and relaxation that comes from using
tobacco
, and They can not put it aside.
This
dependence has led them to use
tobacco
in any situation,
such
as happiness, sadness or anger. Another side to discuss are
countries
that accept the rule because they have confidence that using
tobacco
in public is harmful. It is possible for someone in a space to have a health problem and inhaling smoke can make them feel bad,
For example
; In some restaurants, some have just come to eat food, but smoke fills the whole space. So, they can not enjoy their food.
on the other
hand
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there are some
countries
that allocate
a
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room in
public
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a public
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place
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such
as
airport
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airports
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or
mall
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, for smokers.
This
is so moderate not only respect
the
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people’s social right
,
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but
also
make
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other
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feel comfortable. To conclude, it is fair to have laws against
tobacco
in public buildings
such
as offices, café or
resturants
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restaurants
restaurant
. The government must strike a balance between smokers and non-smokers.
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