Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and resturants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.
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Nowadays, some
countries
have passed laws against smoking tobacco
in public buildings, but on the other side, some countries
believe that is
a personal choice. This
essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those people who support smoking tobacco
in social places, believe that this
is a personal choice, and It is their body and it does not harm anyone. They are accustomed to the delight and relaxation that comes from using tobacco
, and They can not put it aside. This
dependence has led them to use tobacco
in any situation, such
as happiness, sadness or anger.
Another side to discuss are countries
that accept the rule because they have confidence that using tobacco
in public is harmful. It is possible for someone in a space to have a health problem and inhaling smoke can make them feel bad, For example
; In some restaurants, some have just come to eat food, but smoke fills the whole space. So, they can not enjoy their food. on the other
hand
there are some Add a comma
,hand
countries
that allocate a
room in Correct article usage
apply
public
Add an article
a public
place
Change the noun form
places
such
as airport
or Fix the agreement mistake
airports
mall
, for smokers. Fix the agreement mistake
malls
This
is so moderate not only respect the
people’s social rightCorrect article usage
apply
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
make the
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apply
other
feel comfortable.
To conclude, it is fair to have laws against Correct pronoun usage
others
tobacco
in public buildings such
as offices, café or resturants
. The government must strike a balance between smokers and non-smokers.Correct your spelling
restaurants
restaurant
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