Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this ? Is this a positive or negative development ?

The fact that many

adults

take their spare time to play video

games

on their technological devices

such

as computers is a matter of great concern.

This

issue stems from some reasons including creating social relationships and reducing stress and I believe

this

trend brings

advantage

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adults

. There are several reasons why

adults

want to play computer

games

.

Firstly

, the adult can add new friends from many areas.

For example

, a well-known game in South East Asia called “ league of legends” helps people talk directly and send

messeges

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messages

to their

teamate

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teammate

team mate

to make a strategy for being the winner in their game.

Secondly

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adults

ought to

work

hard to make a living, so they need to relax and recharge batteries for

work

the

next

day. Because

adults

have logical and critical thinking to sell a product or have a meeting with the board of directors in their company, which makes them feel

stressful

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and exhausted. Meanwhile, they might not need to think logically and the

games

have more interesting and hilarious images which

helps

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them be more comfortable and happier. While many people think playing

games

bring many disadvantages, I

also

suppose playing

games

help

adults

learn effectively another language which can be beneficial for their

work

. Due to quality and reality graphics,

adults

tend to play

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foreign game which forces

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adult to communicate and exchange information with their foreign friends in

English

.

Therefore

, they have an

oppurtunity

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opportunity

for direct exposure

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English

instead

of joining extra classes or online courses which are not as effective as playing

games

.

For example

, in Pubg Moblie, the

adults

have to know

English

to control their figure or buy some weapons and especially they have to communicate with their

teamates

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teammates

from other countries in

English

.

As a result

, not only can the

adults

reduce stress after working but they

also

can learn another language like

English

which can create more

work

opportunites

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opportunities

for the player. In conclusion,

adults

play

games

due to having new relationships and being more relaxed after

work

and

this

trend brings them perks concerning learning a language.