Happiness if often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?

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umanity to define the meaning of

happiness

. In my opinion,

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is because

people

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happiness

for themselves,

however

, there are some common factors in creating

happiness

for everyone. It is arguable to say that

happiness

means different to everyone, so it is nearly impossible to give it a general definition. A normal thing for many

people

can be t

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happiness

for someone, or a person’s

happiness

can be t

heir s

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adness in a different situation.

For example

, many

people

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erives

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happiness

from collecting and buying luxurious items, while many other

people

feel joyful when they gave their diamond j

ewelry

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to a charity organization. Personally, I enjoy looking at the r

aining

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sky, but it would be a

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orture for me to walk under a

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eavy rain and have all my clothes wet. As hard as it is to define,

happiness

does share some common factors to create it.

Firstly

,

happiness

contains a sense of achievement. Most

people

have their own life goals and always strive to achieve i

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These goals might be better income, better accommodation or having more relationships with t

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ociety. When

people

accomplished their goals, they can feel the

happiness

inside because of the feeling of achieving something they have always wanted. Another factor creating

happiness

is the connection between humans. It is obvious that

people

feel happier whenever they are closed to their beloved ones, especially their friends and family. Being close to our relatives gives us a safer feeling to express our emotions, relieve our stress and smile more to feel happier. In conclusion,

happiness

isn’t something that we can give a general definition b

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it d

ifferent

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veryone

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of us, but the feeling of success and the friendliness from our relatives can be the two main determinants of

happiness

.