Many do not have access to electricity and this demand is expected to increase about 80% by 2050. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Being in the modern world ,still many people are unable to access heat.

Moreover

, the requirement of

power

is on the rapid growth in

this

industrialization era and many of the studies suggested that 80% of the requirement is going to be rise by 2050. In below, I will discuss the reason behind

this

situation and probable solutions to

overcome

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This

issue is more in developing land rather than developed

nations

. In my opinion, poor democracies are having fewer resources of the infrastructure to generate

power

also

not able to expand their production scope because of funds unavailability.

Moreover

, backward

countries

are mostly concentrated on the supply of service to their existing industries which is the basic source of the income to run the nation.

In addition

to that,

currently

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we are much dependent on fossil fuels to generate heat.

Furthermore

, speedy industrialization has been taken in place for the

last

decade in developing

countries

also

leading to inaccessibility to more people.

This

led to a major hurdle to extend the scope.

For example

, Most of the villages in African

countries

and South Asian

countries

have still not tested heat. To counter

this

issue

nations

has to concentrate on alternative resources to increase

power

generation.

Firstly

, they have to increase the space of existing

power

plants with the available resources.

Secondly

, keeping in mind of limited availability of fossil fuels in future the technology has been increased to generate green energy to control pollution which can help us to reduce global warming.

Thirdly

, Nuclear energy technology has to improve for successful implementation to increase electricity generation.

Finally

, developed

countries

or United

Nations

has been supporting poor

nations

for their infrastructure development. As above, globally all

nations

have to work together to upsurge their existing scope

also

have to work together to implement natural energy with safeguarding climate. In conclusion, we have to work together to raise the capacities

also

researchers have to continue to minimize the usage and maximize the benefit of it.

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