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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.

#television #children #two #five
Television's advertisements targeting little
children
 particularly between the ages of two and five years old
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 are absolutely unacceptable and unjustified.
This
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adresses
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addresses
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 the reasons behind my claim.
First
 of all, it is not acceptable from an ethical point of view for trading companies to use
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Televesion
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Television
 to broadcast
children
's directed advertisements. At ages of less than eighteen years old , the youngsters' mental judgement is still not mature enough to decide regarding the
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 of goods that being advertised ,
thus
, it seems to me that trying to influence
children
's decision through the screen to change their
mind set
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 should be prohibited since it is not ethical at
this
 age at least.
Additionally
, using the media in general and the Television
in particular
 for
children
's targeted advertising might create a consuming society where
children
encountered
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 as the
first
 victims.
In other words
 , parents will be under the pressure of their
children
 to get them the goods shown on the TV
nevertheless
 if they might
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 or not just because they look extremely attractive on the screen. Companies usually enhance shopping impulsivity rather than satisfying
children
's essential needs. In conclusion,
children
 between two and five years old should not ,by any means, be targeted by Television's advertisements , because
this
 is considered ,by me at least, absolutely unethical, and it
also
 might lead to a consuming society with all its negative impacts.
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