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Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely believed, that attending public events like concerts, matches and plays is more exciting than watching It on TV or on video. I totally agree with
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First
 of all, when deciding to visit a football match or music show people expect more than just to see a game or to listen to music. We usually look forward to emotional boost and overwhelming feelings that
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 from thousands of people that surround us. Evidently,
energy
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the energy
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 of a crowd cannot be perceived through a TV screen. From my experience, just being inside a roaring stadium always leaves
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 impression even for those who are not fans of sports or bands.
Secondly
, live performance gives to
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 an experience of eye-to-eye contact with artists and celebrities, which could get a thrill for fans.
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, watching a theatre play from front row seats gives a viewer a feeling of being a part of
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, makes
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 to read emotions from actors’ faces and empathise with their emotions.
Moreover
, modern sound technologies are still not capable to reproduce real orchestra music and singer voices.
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, opera lovers would prefer to enjoy the show in a concert hall rather than in
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 quiet and
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 conditions of their homes. To summarize, witnessing live performances seem to be much more fascinating than watching it on television mostly because of
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the atmosphere
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 of a place and
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the energy
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 of a moment and
people
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the people
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around
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This
 level of emotions can hardly be achieved by sitting on the couch.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive experience
  • replicated
  • energy
  • atmosphere
  • sense of community
  • shared excitement
  • unforgettable
  • predictable
  • convenience
  • comfort
  • crowds
  • travel
  • multiple camera angles
  • close-ups
  • replays
  • enhancing
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