The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagrams illustrate the life cycle of
salmon
from different perspectives.
Overall
, there are 3 primary step
in a transformation from fry to smolt and to adult Change to a plural noun
steps
salmon
.
Firstly
, salmon
eggs are placed in the upper river where the water current are
moving slowly. More clearly that in the reeds with a number of tiny stones. They spend almost half a year for eggs to develop into fry which Change the verb form
is
look
similar to small Change the verb form
looks
fishes
, about 3 to 8 Fix the agreement mistake
fish
centimeter
Fix the agreement mistake
centimeters
Secondly
, some information present that after turn
Wrong verb form
turning
in to
fry, they move to the Correct your spelling
into
faster flowing
water which Add a hyphen
faster-flowing
called
Add a missing verb
is called
lower
river, and stay there for about 4 years they grow and become larger , s Add an article
a lower
the lower
molt
, which is about 12 to 15 Change the spelling
moult
centimeter
.
Change the spelling
centimetre
Finally
, they continue their journey to the open sea, another 5 years were spent and eventually smolt develop to
an adult Change preposition
into
salmon
which about
70 to 76 cm. Add a missing verb
is about
Then
they again move to the upper river for reproduction after reaching this
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