Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

This
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illustrates how a village called Felixstowe has been changed over 34 years(1967-2001).Overall,
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There have been several changes, but the most noticeable being increase in urbanization, elimination of farmland and introduction to wind power. In 1967,in the northwest Golf course was placed. Just beyond ,it 2 shops lied parallel to each other and the high street was in the middle of them. On the northeast
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intended for the farmland.In the
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southwest dunes were situated.
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to it hotel and café offered the best service to the population of that village. On the southeast
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fish market was constructed which was the main revenue of the village.
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,
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a marina and pier were built to demonstrate better service to the workers and customers. In 2001, on the north
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Golf course stayed untouched and offered eccentric methods to improve citizens’ skills. Observation can be made in the strengthening of the population the elimination of the shop and replacement with Apartments. Just beyond , its farmland was cleared,
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people were able to create an appropriate area for a swimming pool, hotel and tennis courts.On the southwest
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dunes stayed unspoilt. Individuals started getting benefits from wind turbines. ,
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the requirements of the new age car park were placed with together the old hotel and café. The innovative idea was demonstrated by allowing swim near the sea and making the related areas a public beach. The fish business was demolished and converted to a private beach for amenities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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