Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that
music
can gather people who have cultural and age differences. I disagree with
this
statement to some extent. On the one hand, I admit
music
as a universal language may unity people with differences.
First
, it could connect the majority through their emotions.
For instance
, when a piece of
music
become popular in the United States in English, after a while
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noticeable number of people in the east, with another culture or even language, will hear it at the same time or with few weeks apart.
This
bond is created because they have similar feelings,
such
as sadness or happiness by hearing the same
music
.
In addition
,
music
can affect different age groups in the same way. To illustrate, Mohammed Reza Shajarian, an old traditional Iranian singer, has a noticeable portion of his fans, in
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population in Iran, as well as elderlies.
However
, these potential functions are overshadowed by other factors.
Firstly
,
music
may help individuals to be connected with a universal language,
such
as English, but there are a large number of songs singing in other languages.
Also
, some cultures vary too much, and the gap is so huge which can not be filled by a song.
Furthermore
, the generation gap is becoming more every day, and due to that,
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of
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every
age is so different
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the others. So these days, it is very uncommon that children
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to the same
music
that their parents do. In conclusion, despite the potential benefits of
music
in connecting various cultures and ages, I disagree that it unity them, efficiently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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