Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals form dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, more and more animals all over the world are becoming endangered. There is a common view that authorities and the public should take responsibility

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these animals. At the same time , others believe that people need to lay emphasis on human behaviours. In

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essay, I will review both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.

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with, there is no doubt that it is essential to promote people’s awareness of protecting instinctive species.

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, schools and universities can play a vital role

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environmental knowledge through daily classes or speeches to students which helps to build an accurate value on specious protection.

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, tangible measures could be taken by governments,

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, setting up the special protection centre, and attributing professional researchers to take care of them in a scientific way. And most endangered species are successfully protected in

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effective approach

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as pandas and tigers.

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, with the development of medical technology, biologists now doing

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to serve the reproduction of living creatures, which alleviates

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dire situation to an extent.

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, regulating

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behaviours should be given more emphasis, since an increasing number of human activities are harmful to the ecosystem ,

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, the fossil fuel by private cars can lead to serious atmospheric pollution, posing a threat to animals' living environment. It means that it is unrealistic to solve the underlying problem

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.

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, governments should make practical laws to regulate everyone’s behaviours, strict punishment should be proposed .

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, those who abuse dogs might be given a negative record by the

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, which could affect their job promotion or university enrollment. To summarize, it is necessary to do more on protection, meanwhile, taking more concentration on personal activity has its’ equal importance. In the final analysis, one can only conclude that we should focus on how to improve people's behaviour,

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to continuing our work on rare species conservation.