Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In

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competitive society, many

people

would prefer to work for themselves rather than be an employee for a company or organization.

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, there are many

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and disadvantages for

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phenomenon. There are

many

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reason

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for an increasing number of young

people

to start a business by themselves.

Firstly

, due to the competition in applying for a good job, they made that decision.

People

want to world in a well-known organization of well-paid jobs but these

organization

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require high qualification degrees and excellent skills.

Therefore

, it boosts the competitive market and makes many difficulties for individuals seeking

good

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job.

Secondly

, some young entrepreneurs desire to be rich. When they choose to be self-employed, they can get more profit and become rich in a short time.

However

, these young

businessman

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businessmen

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have to face

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many

drawback

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if they do not have enough experience and knowledge. They can take risk of not having enough money in time. If

these

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company has bankrupt, they can lose

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everything

. Another

disadvantages

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is that self-employed

people

have to do work day to day and more times than

employee

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in another company.

Therefore

, they do not have enough time for their family children and affect badly relationship. It makes an imbalance between work and life and the personal routine can be changed as well. In conclusion, self-employed entrepreneurs have many benefits to make them rich but there are many disadvantages should be considered.