Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays many individuals believe that they may watch
movies
using their modern devices and it is not
necesarry
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necessary
to visit a
cinema
at all.
However
, huge fans of
films
are sure that it is important to visit a
cinema
to get absolutely satisfied. Frankly speaking, in my point of view watching
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films
on a big screen with high-quality sound is
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memorable, enjoyable and
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way of watching compared to using
phone
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a phone
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or tablet. Certainly, it became comfortable enough to watch
films
since technology has improved. Needless to say, watching
movies
using current devices has plenty of advantages.
First
of all, these days the Internet enables to download almost any film absolutely free sometimes with no commercial.
Secondly
, it is very
conveniet
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convenient
to enjoy watching on a comfortable sofa at home at any time you like
instead
of going to the
cinema
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a certain time. Despite the fact that it is necessary to spend some money and buy a ticket
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a
cinema
, it will be more comfortable and impressive to watch a movie
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higher quality, with a better audio system and special effects.
Moreover
, it is highly unlikely to find
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latest film on the Internet
in
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good quality.
Therefore
, only a
cinema
makes it possible. What is more, visiting a
cinema
is beneficial for mental health. According to
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research, watching positive
movies
with special effects encourages
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system to realise chemicals
such
as
seratonin
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serotonin
and
dophamin
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dopamine
which are in charge
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good
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mood. To conclude, it is a good option indeed to watch some
movies
and
TV-series
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on
phone’s
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and tablet’s
screen
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becase
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because
it will cost no charge.
However
,
such
films
can not be seen on a high-quality that might have a negative impression after watching. Whereas, going to a
cinema
is one of the best entertainment which everyone can afford.
Besides
, it is
definately
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definitely
advantageous for mental health let alone the emotions one can get watching a movie in high
quallity
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quality
with perfect sound.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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