Some people believe that it is responsibility of individual to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Research findings confirm that several psychological and emotional problems are associated with one’s diet. A group of individuals present the view that
people
should attitude towards nutritious and healthy meals, Use synonyms
whereas
others believe governments must undertake responsibility for providing them with fresh and natural sources of food. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. On the one hand, some Linking Words
people
justifiably argue that organic and healthy Use synonyms
foods
are often expensive and individuals in deprived areas are not able to benefit from them. These kinds of Use synonyms
foods
should have been made available at a reasonable price through authorities in all regions. Use synonyms
In addition
, in many Linking Words
governments’
offices, universities and schools, there are numerous Change noun form
governments
people
who consume what is cooked there that have poor quality. Use synonyms
Consequently
, governments play a vital role in one’s diet. Linking Words
On the other hand
, another group of individuals claim if Linking Words
people
are interested Use synonyms
to have
a healthy lifestyle, they should choose to consume more vegetables Change preposition
in having
instead
of prepared Linking Words
foods
. It is true that Use synonyms
people
do not have enough time to cook on a daily basis, but there are many meals that will be ready easily at least at dinner. Use synonyms
However
, I do not find Linking Words
this
argument convincing as nowadays countless Linking Words
people
are suffering from financial problems and have to work Use synonyms
to
nearly midnight. Change preposition
until
Thus
, they often use fast Linking Words
foods
in their meals. Use synonyms
To conclude
, in my view, foremost governments should be aware of what their citizens eat during the day and try to Linking Words
and
boost them. High-quality Correct word choice
apply
foods
are not often cheap and available to all Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
as a result
of a financial pinch, Linking Words
people
do not have sufficient time to engage in cookingUse synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion