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Some people think that travelling abroad is necessary while others believe it's not because TV and the Internet can give people the same information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people think that travelling is the most advantageously
way
 to learn some things new.
However
, others think contrary so, they suggest that TV and the Internet have given same the information. Before expressing my own opinion, let's look at the explanations of both sides in more detail. The people who, advocate the view watching TV and the internet are much better than going abroad give some coherent argument.
First
 of all, the technology is chipper than going somewhere so, travelling is not accessible for everyone because everyone has not enough money for going abroad. The
second
 main factor is travelling is spending lots of time and energy.
Thus
, estimated time en route sometimes resembles torture for tourists. Another factor is that travelling is a risky
way
 of learning new things because every year lots of people are dying or injured on occasion.
On the other hand
, others, including me, support the idea any
experience
 can not replace travelling
,
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 because watching TV and the Internet are belong to others' experiences. Everyone has a unique journey
experience
,
therefore
, going abroad gives us an unforgettable when you have your own
experience
. Another main factor travelling abroad give us new acquaintance which it is the best
way
 to understand the country tradition, history and psychology. All in all, both sides have good reasons for travelling
experience
. Technologies are the easiest and chipset
way
 for learning other countries and nations features.
However
, we have never gained real-life
experience
 like travelling abroad experiences.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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