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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that situation between male and female who to be able to different kind of workability and characteristics which means some other kind of
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 position suitable for theirs. I personally agree with
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 situation. There are two primary reasons is that enormous force and generously emotional.
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 of all, all the men seem much stronger than
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. Put more simply the ladies couldn't
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 as gentlemen can in construction. As a ,result if males
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 in building so that they will earn fascinating salaries. One of the perfect examples of
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 is so many different
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 positions is not fit for
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 as plumber, aircraft/pilot and car repairmen. in my position ideally for men all these jobs. My closest friend works in the biggest plumber company whom he says for me while is her directes always saying
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 job isn't to fit for a woman.
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 and even more importantly though
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 have much more emotional than the opposite sex.
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 they are knowing other people without their words. One particularly good example of
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 is the United States America's one of the biggest statistic "
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 highly talented to teaching skills" which they capable to communicate children easier way because they have a natural data so all the
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 can bear their young ones. By way of conclusion, I once again restate my view that not only huge strengthens but
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 high emotional between girls and boys for their characters and job ability
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate
  • biological differences
  • characteristics
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • gender biases
  • fair representation
  • skills
  • qualifications
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