protecting the marine environment is a urgent problem, do you agree?

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1.Introduction Our world manufactures
tons
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of
plastic
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waste
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every day and many of them are improperly handled. A study estimated that there are about 8-9 million
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of
plastic
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waste
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would throw into the ocean, which greatly destroys the
marine
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environment
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(Rashid, as cited in Rhodes,2019). As
plastic
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waste
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threatens the
marine
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environment
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, the
management
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of
marine
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plastic
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waste
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takes the responsibility of processed
plastic
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waste
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.
This
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report will briefly outline some common
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identified in the
management
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of
marine
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plastic
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waste
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. It will
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suggest some recommendations to solve the suggested
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. 2.
Problems
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in the
management
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of
marine
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plastic
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waste
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2.1. Difficulties of controlling personal littering
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One
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of the reasons for
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of
plastic
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waste
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in the
sea
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is littering.
Marine
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animals
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are suffering from the
plastic
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waste
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that is
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dropped to
sea
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carelessly. Moeen (as cited in Rhodes,2019) states that around
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million
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birds and
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hundred thousand
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animals
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are suffered from ingestion and entanglement every year. The floated
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waste
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not only pollutes the
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environment
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but
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entangles
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animals
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and be ingested by them, which may cause mortality and starvation of
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animals
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. Different littering actions,
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as leaving
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waste
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on the beach and throw to the
sea
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caused
marine
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pollution. Rhodes (2019) states that normally larger
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items, including bottles for water and other drinks,
plastic
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bags and fishing nets formed as microplastics.
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littering has become a serious
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, it is hard for the
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to control personal
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, supervise and stop people to litter. 2.2
Lack
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of formal
waste
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management
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facilities
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and
management
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To
process
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tons
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of
plastic
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waste
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, the support of the
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is indispensable.
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, a main reason for the serious
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pollution is many places
don’t
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have an adequate
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system. Mendenhall (2020) states that some less developed
countries
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located in coastal areas
don’t
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have many human and economic resources or modern
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infrastructure and
management
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systems. These
countries
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don’t
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have the funds to recycle
plastic
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waste
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and build proper
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management
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systems that can capture
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products to avoid
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waste
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being driven to the
sea
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by the wind. 2.3
Lack
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of recycling
facilities
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and
policies
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To deal with the
marine
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waste
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problem
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,
one
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of the effective remedies is for the
government
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to put much effort and resources into recycling
plastic
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waste
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.
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, not many
countries
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have specific and appropriate
policies
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for recycling
plastic
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waste
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, especially for less developed
countries
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.
Yangyang
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et al. (2021)
state
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that some
countries
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don’t
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have adequate
facilities
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and technology to develop
plastic
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waste
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stream
management
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,
such
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as in Vietnam, the recycling
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and technologies are outmoded and just have a low
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waste
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recycling rate per year. Without a proper
process
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to proceed with
plastic
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waste
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,
plastic
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waste
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may accumulate in landfills and be thrown into the ocean. Not only
lack
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of recycling
facilities
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, sometimes the
government
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policies
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have less awareness on recycling or cannot coordinate the recycling
process
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.
Yangyang
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et al. (2021)
state
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that there are limited resource recovery
facilities
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in Indonesia’s major cities, but the
government
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still allow a 150%
increase
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in
plastic
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waste
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imports in 2018, which shows that the Indonesia
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don’t
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pay attention to solving the insignificance of recycling and decrease the huge amount of
plastic
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waste
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. Without the support of the
government
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, it is hard for
plastic
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waste
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to be properly processed and being recycling and even get into vicious recycling of throwing
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waste
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into the ocean.
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, some
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‘governments
also
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actively accept imported
plastic
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waste
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to
increase
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countries
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’ income.
Yangyang
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et al. (2021)
state
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that many
countries
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have a great
increase
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in imported
plastic
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waste
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,
such
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as Vietnam has an about 350%
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in
plastic
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waste
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imports, which makes a heavy burden to the
countries
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’ outmoded
plastic
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waste
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stream
management
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. 3. Suggested recommendation To deal with the above
problems
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in the
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of
marine
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plastic
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waste
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, here are some suggestions to improve or solve them. 3.1. Encouraging
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reduction
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process
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The only way to completely decrease the great amount of
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waste
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is by encouraging people to use fewer
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products. To raise public awareness on protecting the
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and reducing using single-use
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, it is suggested to promote the concept of
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reduction
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. Walther et al. (2020)
state
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that more environmental groups are focusing on and promoting
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-free practices, sharing their key opinions and suggestions through different online platforms. With the influences of the online platform,
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plastic
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reduction
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could be widely spread, and people are easier
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more information on environmental protection.
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, more celebrities are promoting
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-free on the internet,
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as Jeri Ryan and William Shatner, their promotion would effectively encourage their fans and followers to know more about
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reduction
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and follow their idol’s actions. 3.2. Providing convenient
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infrastructure For less developed
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or rural areas, it is suggested to provide simple but practical
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infrastructure. Willis et.al (2018)
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that rubbish bins could be placed in popular public areas,
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as shopping malls and beaches, proving a convenient place for the public to throw their
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waste
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. The placement of rubbish bins may seem like a mere trifle but actually, it provides an immediate solution to deal with the
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of continuous
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throwing
problem
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. 3.3 Strengthening the
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management
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ability For less developed
countries
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that
lack
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recycling
facilities
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and
policies
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, and ack of formal
waste
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management
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facilities
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and
management
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, they should decrease and stop the amount of importing
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waste
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as they
don’t
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have many resources and
facilities
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to recycle
plastic
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waste
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. In the long term, they should
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improve the
countries
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’ environmental
policies
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and focus on managing the country’s internally generated
plastic
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waste
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.
Yangyang
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et al. (2021)
state
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that different
countries
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have Implemented environmental policy to limit the
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waste
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imports,
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as China has banned the entry of
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waste
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as
one
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of the twenty-four solid
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categories. Stopping import
plastic
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waste
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and focusing on dealing with internally generated
plastic
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waste
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is the only way to build consummate
management
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of
plastic
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waste
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and solve the
problem
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of
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plastic
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waste
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