The best way to solve the world's environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent you are agree and disagree ?

It is undeniable fact that vehicles are
one
of the
reason
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for climate problems.
However
, there are two predominantly thoughts that
one
section of society view that
increase
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the
fuel
cost will reduce
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the environment
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environment
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problem, while others emphasize
otherwise
.
Nevertheless
, in my contention I am partially agreed on hiking
of
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gas
price
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will solve the environment. Apparently,
current
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epoch to full fill population transport demand no of privately owned vehicles has increased.
First
and foremost cars
emits
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carbon
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a carbon
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footprint
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foot print
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, which is causing the reduction of ozone layer
gas
.
Secondly
, an average middle class keeps more than
one
privately owned transportation medium.
For instance
, in a family of four
adult
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having four cars.
In
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one
of the recent
survey
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conducted by BBC has shown in cities people to vehicle ratio is 1: 2.
Thirdly
, is Fossil
fuel
motor really emits harmful
gas
like co2? Certainly yes, It emits CO2 which is harmful and hot
gas
. Definitely
increase
of
fuel
price will reduce no of motors on road.
Moreover
, we can not only blame
to
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privately run automobiles
,
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but
also
commercial means of transport too.
On
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the same point of view industries and
also
all other energy resources which usages fossils fuels we can put in
same
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bucket.
However
, to stop climate changes
one
need to use
natural
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source of
fuel
like sun-light operated transports. To conclude,
increase
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of
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petroleum prices will reduce private own but it
also
impact
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on
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commercial vehicles too, which can
increase
inflation.
Also
, factories are
one
of the main
reason
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reasons
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for harmful
gas
and waste which impact more than personal transport. At
last
, we need to use natural resources as part of the fuels like sun-like, wind energy to same our natural atmosphere.
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