The best way to solve the world's environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent you are agree and disagree ?
It is undeniable fact that vehicles are
one
of the reason
for climate problems. Change to a plural noun
reasons
However
, there are two predominantly thoughts that one
section of society view that increase
the Wrong verb form
increasing
fuel
cost will reduce Correct article usage
the environment
environment
problem, while others emphasize Replace the word
environmental
otherwise
. Nevertheless
, in my contention I am partially agreed on hiking of
Change preposition
apply
gas
price
will solve the environment.
Apparently, Fix the agreement mistake
prices
current
epoch to full fill population transport demand no of privately owned vehicles has increased. Correct article usage
the current
First
and foremost cars emits
Change the verb form
emit
carbon
Correct article usage
a carbon
Correct your spelling
footprint
foot print
, which is causing the reduction of ozone layer Correct your spelling
footprint
gas
. Secondly
, an average middle class keeps more than one
privately owned transportation medium. For instance
, in a family of four adult
having four cars. Fix the agreement mistake
adults
In
Change preposition
One
one
of the recent survey
conducted by BBC has shown in cities people to vehicle ratio is 1: 2. Fix the agreement mistake
surveys
Thirdly
, is Fossil fuel
motor really emits harmful gas
like co2? Certainly yes, It emits CO2 which is harmful and hot gas
. Definitely increase
of fuel
price will reduce no of motors on road.
Moreover
, we can not only blame to
privately run automobilesChange preposition
apply
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
commercial means of transport too. On
the same point of view industries and Change preposition
From
also
all other energy resources which usages fossils fuels we can put in same
bucket. Change the article
the same
However
, to stop climate changes one
need to use natural
source of Add an article
a natural
fuel
like sun-light operated transports.
To conclude, increase
Add an article
an increase
of
petroleum prices will reduce private own but it Change preposition
in
also
impact
Change the verb form
impacts
on
commercial vehicles too, which can Change preposition
apply
increase
inflation. Also
, factories are one
of the main reason
for harmful Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
gas
and waste which impact more than personal transport. At last
, we need to use natural resources as part of the fuels like sun-like, wind energy to same our natural atmosphere.Submitted by namita.sinha25 on
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