Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a view that
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selection
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give valuable information regards to individual’s
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identity
and cultural belonging. I partially agree with
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statement to several opinions, and I will explain why in
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essay. On the one hand, it is true that the choice of
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made by each individual is not always influenced by their character or mindset. There are often limits to how much we can discover just by looking at someone’s
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, especially when it comes to their personality.
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, the richest person in the world
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Elon Musk commonly wear ordinary
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according to their liking and
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is cannot reveal anything about them.
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is because he
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using comfortable
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than
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dress sense.
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, ordinary-looking
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unmake him lose his prestige because everyone knows that he is rich and smart.
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sure that
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might express the character and culture of
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as well. The living environment probably
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the choices of
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an individual’s
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atter.
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,
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in the city
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has more variety of dress appearance. Commonly, in the city
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more
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luxurious lifestyle and there
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many
variatons
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variations
of models and brands.
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, wardrobe might express the character of an individual. Take an example, the motivated and cheerful person
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colour
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of atter.
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with serious mental stresses tend to wear dark and untidy
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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