You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

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Dear Luiza, How are you? We haven'

seen each other for a while now. I really miss you! I'm writing to tell you that I've just moved to a new home, so I'd like to invite you to visit me in my new place. As you already know, the house I was renting had a college republic nearby. It didn'

bother me at all, at

first

However

, when the summer began the youngers started throwing parties every single night and the sound coming from the outside was too loud.

Therefore

, it annoyed me very much since I couldn'

sleep!

In addition

, complete strangers would come and go across my street for enjoying the republic and it made me feel really unsafe.

Nevertheless

, know I've just moved to a really nice place. It's a huge detached house with two bedrooms, two bathrooms and a very delightful fireplace. My new home is located downtown, just across the street from the public library. It

also

has a breathtaking view from the lake behind, as I believe you're going to love it. Why don'

you come over for dinner, on Sunday night? I can cook some pasta for us,

then

we can watch a good comedy movie and have some refreshing drinks. You might bring your children as well

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if you want. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon. Please, give my regards to your parents. Best wishes, Anna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

235 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The increase in people’s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a younger age. Is this alternative a positive or negative development?

Some people think that children are having to much free time and this time should be use to study more