The detailed description about crime will affect people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an argument whether public detail about
crime
should be accessible in the media or not. Add an article
the crime
This
essay will discuss both points of view.
First
of all, nowadays, news travel in
a fast speed within a matter of minutes. Change preposition
at
For instance
, crime
is one of the news which has been sharing
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shared
in
the internet. Change the preposition
on
For example
, for a while, one female murderer became highly well-known in Tiktok for a
beautiful appearance and unique behaviours in the court. The Change the word
their
his
her
muderer
appeared calm and playful even after being sentenced to jail for a Correct your spelling
murderer
Correct your spelling
lifetime
life-time
. Correct your spelling
lifetime
This
action was weirdly attracted to numbers of people which gained the offender a frame and many supports. However
, the issue has been raised that sharing positively about offenders in the media is considered to be encouragement
for a Add an article
an encouragement
crime
. Furthermore
, kids may mistakely
see Correct your spelling
mistakenly
them
as role models and follow their paths.
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themselves
On the other hand
, due to a
fast transmission of information, people can be alerted Remove the article
apply
immedietly
in case of emergency. Correct your spelling
immediately
For example
, if there are terrorists' attack
and people share about Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
it
, other persons can avoid that area and polices would be informed about the situation. Correct pronoun usage
them
In addition
, the internet can be used to spread awareness regarding a safe society by posting how serious or how often crime
have been reported as well as how to lessen them.
In conclusion, it should not be completely controlled in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
an
essential information regarding illegal actions in my perspective. Remove the article
apply
However
, media users should have a high level of self-awareness to not encourage such
actions.Submitted by petchlada.yaovapak on
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