TASK 2: In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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While global

tourism

has significantly improved multiple nations’ GDP, it exerts adverse effects. The following essay will analyse both of these aspects and overall I advocate that the advantages take precedence over the disadvantages. The principal issue with a dramatic increase in international

tourism

is the harm to the environment and tangible cultural heritage caused by tourists.

This

is because of the unconsciousness of travellers to litter discriminately, vandalise or thieve as well as annihilate the legacy. According to recent research, most beaches in Vietnam have become polluted and full of rubbish due to the overload of intercontinental tourists and the statistics is believed to be worse over time unless the governments confine

tourism

amount or establish strict protection laws to the beaches.

Otherwise

, these beaches will be longer in use and the investment used to recover those values in the future will be extremely pricey.

Consequently

, international

tourism

has negative influences on the country's economy, environment and cultural values.

On the other hand

, international

tourism

encourages the country’s social and economic growth as it provides several job opportunities to local residents.

This

will reduce the unemployment rate which could mitigate the social crimes caused by the lack of income. Thanks to the

tourism

development in Phu Quoc, 75% of residents had been able to escape impoverishment and 89% of local people had basic literacy knowledge by the end of 2019.

As a result

, the living standard of various families has improved. Not only can global

tourism

stimulate the GDP growth of some countries to improve their economy and society but it

also

advertises the national image to worldwide publicity as it assists to bring the national cultural values closer to foreigners. In conclusion, despite the possible adversity which I believe is possible to tackle by previous recommendation, the positive impact of international

tourism

on the countries outweighs the negativity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Revenue
Accommodation
Cultural exchange
Infrastructure
Pollution
Erosion
Overcrowding
Economic dependency
Global events
Sustainable tourism
Mutual understanding
Strain on natural resources
Foot traffic
Local traditions and customs
Cultural awareness
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Pandemics
Political instability
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TASK 2: In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

In some countries, owning a homes rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with opinion?