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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#businesses #emphasise #products #development
The given bar chart illustrates the data about major
complaints
 at main cities in the UK which have been done in 2008. These units are measured
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 wise. Overall, there are three main issues
such
 as
complaints
 from health services, problems from education and training departments and air pollution. According to the graph, all major cities highly received
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60% of residents from the Belfast, Birmingham and Cardiff has condemnation in medical services.
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, around 50%
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publics
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 in all cities had shown objections
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 schools and colleges.
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, 5 % to 10% of residents were worried about
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 of the air. In terms of
complaints
 per person, The Belfast people registered more about hospital facility, The Glasgow and London opposed against schooling system more and The Manchester had maximum
complaints
 about the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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