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The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, discussing climate changes and air pollution and water pollution, and global warming has become popular among
people
 all around the world. Some
people
 think that living a less comfortable life is a decisive factor in the future of
next
-generation and our planet. I agree with
this
 idea, as I will discuss in my essay.
First
 of all,
People
 should attempt to eliminate some non-biodegradable
such
 as glass,
plastic
, and metal from daily routine. These items cause irreparable damage to the climate.
For example
, the widespread use of
plastic
 in supermarkets is common, and many
people
 have changed their habits to use cloth
instead
 of
plastic
, and
also
 governments have encouraged
people
 by offering the award. In the long term, using less
plastic
 plays a vital role in the protection of the environment. No one is too small to make a difference.
Furthermore
,
people
 should prevent deforestation and cut down trees by changing their lifestyles. It would be better to limit the consumption of paper.
For instance
,
as a result
 of the development of technology,
people
 have smartphones or laptops, which are extremely helpful. We have been able to write an important note there
instead
 of writing it on paper.
This
 action leads to reducing deforestation and helps us to protect the environment for the
next
 generation. In conclusion, in my opinion, we are responsible for preserving the environment and trying to keep it secure. Limiting the consumption of
plastic
 and paper is vital to have a more beautiful world.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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