Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only those

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of

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that are endangered must be safeguarded

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others have the opinion that we should preserve all

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irrespective of their status. I agree with the latter part of the view and in the next few ,paragraphs I shall explain both perspectives with reasons. On the one hand, wild

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like tigers and polar bears are on the verge of extinction because of severe poaching and

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erosion, which has led to the ecological imbalance of the wildlife environment.

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, more herbivore

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will survive like sheep and cattle, as the carnivore

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are rarely to find and feed them.

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, conservationists are of the perception that endangered

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are more vulnerable to disappearance and circumstances of their

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are

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becoming a less common sight. To epitomize,

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International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN) Red List lists many

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like the Siberian tiger, polar bear and giant panda as

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to disappear from the face of the earth.

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, these

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should be protected by making strict laws on poaching and

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habitat

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loss

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should be

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. On the other hand, if only a few

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are preserved

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there is a high possibility that others may at the verge of suffering from harmful circumstances like climate change and

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loss.

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,

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may lead to the deaths of other

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.

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, it is vital that we protect all

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irrespective of

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numbers available because all

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deserve to survive in a convenient way.

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, I conclude that despite a few

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suffering huge and are on the verge of vanishing because of human greed of poaching and environmental pollution,

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conversationists

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that all

animals

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should be safeguarded because only a few selected

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are looked

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remaining left look will cause them to survive other will die

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lead to ecological imbalance.

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, all

animals

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should be protected.