Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only those

species

of

animals

that are endangered must be safeguarded

while

others have the opinion that we should preserve all

animals

irrespective of their status. I agree with the latter part of the view and in the next few ,paragraphs I shall explain both perspectives with reasons. On the one hand, wild

animals

like tigers and polar bears are on the verge of extinction because of severe poaching and

habitat

erosion, which has led to the ecological imbalance of the wildlife environment.

Consequently

, more herbivore

animals

will survive like sheep and cattle, as the carnivore

animals

are rarely to find and feed them.

Therefore

, conservationists are of the perception that endangered

species

are more vulnerable to disappearance and circumstances of their

habitat

are

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becoming a less common sight. To epitomize,

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According to

International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN) Red List lists many

species

like the Siberian tiger, polar bear and giant panda as

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to disappear from the face of the earth.

Hence

, these

animals

should be protected by making strict laws on poaching and

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habitat

loss

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them

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should be

rebuilt

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. On the other hand, if only a few

animals

are preserved

then

there is a high possibility that others may at the verge of suffering from harmful circumstances like climate change and

habitat

loss.

Hence

,

this

may lead to the deaths of other

animals

.

Therefore

, it is vital that we protect all

animals

irrespective of

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numbers available because all

animals

deserve to survive in a convenient way.

Therefore

, I conclude that despite a few

animals

are

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suffering huge and are on the verge of vanishing because of human greed of poaching and environmental pollution,

conversationist

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conversationists

often

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that all

animals

should be safeguarded because only a few selected

species

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remaining left look will cause them to survive other will die

hence

lead to ecological imbalance.

Therefore

, all

animals

should be protected.