all over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. this problem affects both children and adults. what are the reasons for this rise inn obesity? how could it be tackled?
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people
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Moreover
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people
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and lose weight.
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. Unless actions must be taken urgently, our societies will face even greater health problems in the futureUse synonyms
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