Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
believed that all students have to study useful subjects that
is
crucial for their Change the verb form
are
future
,while some people
guide their children to their passionate
.Replace the word
passion
i
consider that Change the capitalization
I
people
should focus on student's ability and their love more than their future
position in society. I will discuss both views in further
paragraphs.
To begin
with , Add an article
a parent
the parent
parent
who Fix the agreement mistake
parents
find
out their children's personal Change the verb form
finds
fullfillment
and Correct your spelling
fulfilment
try
to help them in a way to reach their intentions Will have more successful students in Change the verb form
tries
future
,for instance
, when someone is attracted to art it is illogical to be a successful physician . Everybody has it's own abtitude
and curiosity so it is impossible to expect all Correct your spelling
aptitude
attitude
humens
have to study in Correct your spelling
humans
specefic
area whereas, all Correct your spelling
specific
people
have variety
of needs in society Add an article
a variety
for
example, work Add the comma(s)
,for
resourses
are needed in all aspects.
Correct your spelling
resources
On the other hand
, parents who always thinking about their children's Job status
and prestige do not Add a hyphen
Job-status
thinking
about their capacities ,passions and talents.Change the verb form
think
i
consider that they are Change the capitalization
I
worring
about their Correct your spelling
worrying
worried
working
future
economical status and budget. It is totally true that in some countries such
as iran
, the rate of redundancy among graduation of engineering is higher than medical counterparts. Change the capitalization
Iran
iron
Moreover
, the mean salary proportion which is mentioned in
the internet for medical graduates Change the preposition
on
are
higher rather than artists , engineers and so on.
To sum up, Change the verb form
is
ibelieve
that one who Correct your spelling
I believe
believe
do
not follow his/her passions cannot have a successful life , by choosing Change the verb form
does
specefic
subjects you can study high prestige majors but it never leads to Correct your spelling
specific
wealthness
or success.Correct your spelling
wealthiness
healthiness
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