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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#educationalists #exchange #visits #benefit #teenagers #school
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This
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First
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then
 brought to the factory, where they put the flour into the mixer after adding water and oil to make dough. The mixer makes the dough and rolls it onto the rollers to make dough sheets and
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 strips them into equal lengths and sizes. After that, the machine makes the
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Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educationalists
  • international exchange visits
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • outweigh
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • school
  • exposes
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • enhances
  • language skills
  • promotes
  • independence
  • self-confidence
  • builds
  • lifelong friendships
  • provides
  • unique learning experiences
  • expensive
  • homesickness
  • emotional distress
  • careful planning
  • logistical arrangements
  • disrupt
  • academic progress
  • safety
  • security risks
  • cultural appropriation
  • misunderstandings
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