In many countries, children show less respect to elders. What are the causes of such behavior? What can be done to address this situation?

Nowadays in vast countries , teenth
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demonstrate
less respect to older.
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reasons
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this
situation and try to give solutions to solve
this
problem. One of the most significant
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is upbringing. To be exact, it means that
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parents at home do not teach to
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the child
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child
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how teenagers must
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to people, who for a lot older than they.
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, might be that some
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have
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been growing in
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family
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, where there can be no question of respect, since may father beat mother or
this
toddler, and of course after all of
these child
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will have
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bad education
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because most of
citizens
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the citizens
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take raising in
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from parents. To solve
this
problem, the state needs to pay attention to
such
families Another not less important problem is
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influence. To be more specific, it can be friends or classmates or someone else, but
usually
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it was from nasty company.
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may be
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some
student
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had been normal and decent
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before
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individual
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who never studied and was always ill-mannered and very rude, and after
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that child will turn into the same person without a share of respect for elders. To remove
this
issue, the schools must
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to
such
kind of learner
,
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and try to control situations like
this
. To conclude, it is understandable that not respecting children to the older elder is a very topical issue nowadays, but the worst consequences can be avoided, if not slow action is taken on the examples discussed aboveю
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