In many countries, children show less respect to elders. What are the causes of such behavior? What can be done to address this situation?
Nowadays in vast countries , teenth
demonstrade
less respect to older. Correct your spelling
demonstrate
This
essay will consider main
reasons Correct article usage
the main
of
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for
this
situation and try to give solutions to solve this
problem.
One of the most significant issue
is upbringing. To be exact, it means that Change to a plural noun
issues
may be
parents at home do not teach to Correct your spelling
maybe
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the child
a child
child
how teenagers must Fix the agreement mistake
children
be refers
to people, who for a lot older than they. Change the verb form
be referred
be referring
For example
, might be that some youngster
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youngsters
have
been growing in Change the verb form
has
dysfunctional
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a dysfunctional
family
, where there can be no question of respect, since may father beat mother or Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
toddler, and of course after all of these child
will have Change the determiner
this child
these children
a
bad educationRemove the article
apply
,
because most of Remove the comma
apply
citizens
take raising in Add an article
the citizens
family
from parents. To solve Add an article
the family
a family
this
problem, the state needs to pay attention to such
families
Another not less important problem is bad
influence. To be more specific, it can be friends or classmates or someone else, but Add an article
a bad
usually
it was from nasty company. Add a comma
,usually
For instance
, Correct your spelling
maybe
may be
some Correct your spelling
maybe
student
had been normal and decent Fix the agreement mistake
students
pupil
before Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
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the met
a met
met
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meeting
individual
who never studied and was always ill-mannered and very rude, and after Correct article usage
an individual
this
that child will turn into the same person without a share of respect for elders. To remove Add a comma
,this
this
issue, the schools must be help
to Change the verb form
be helped
such
kind of learner,
and try to control situations like Remove the comma
apply
this
.
To conclude, it is understandable that not respecting children to the older elder is a very topical issue nowadays, but the worst consequences can be avoided, if not slow action is taken on the examples discussed aboveюSubmitted by G9 on
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