A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well managed.

In a modern

world

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tourism

becomes more and more popular as a business and for many countries it is considered as an important proportion of income.

However

, without proper administration

tourism

can create many problems.

This

essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of

this

dilemma and point out do pros outweigh

cons

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.

To begin

with, for sure

tourism

is a very profitable business from

financial

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point of view. People are always curious about seeing interesting places and gaining new experiences, for that reason

tourism

can be considered as an eternal way profit in a stable global situation.

For instance

, according to a recent study of the State Statistics Committee yearly income of

Georgia

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the Georgia

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Republic has decreased 2.5 times in

Covid-19

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period.

Additionally

,

this

is definitely because of the decline in

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tourism

toursim

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industry as during lock-down borders were closed and

Geordia

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Georgia

had lost its main source of budget.

Nevertheless

,

on the other hand

, some

touristic

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countries face many problems, especially during their

tourism

season. Sometimes it becomes hard to control people whose goal is just to relax. Research conducted by Law faculty of Harvard

university

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showed that crime rates in London during winter(which is touristic peak) exceeds a lot that was observed over other seasons of the year.

Furthermore

,

majority

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of those who did not obey the laws were people with touristic

visa

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. To conclude, in my

opinion

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countries need a strategy of how to handle

with

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tourists, but it is obvious that advantages that propose

tourism

is much bigger than

negative

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the negative

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sides.

Moreover

, it is one of the most considerable ways

for

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improving multicultural relations.