A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well managed.
In a modern
world
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,world
tourism
becomes more and more popular as a business and for many countries it is considered as an important proportion of income. Use synonyms
However
, without proper administration Linking Words
tourism
can create many problems. Use synonyms
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essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of Linking Words
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dilemma and point out do pros outweigh Linking Words
cons
.
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the cons
To begin
with, for sure Linking Words
tourism
is a very profitable business from Use synonyms
financial
point of view. People are always curious about seeing interesting places and gaining new experiences, for that reason Add an article
a financial
the financial
tourism
can be considered as an eternal way profit in a stable global situation. Use synonyms
For instance
, according to a recent study of the State Statistics Committee yearly income of Linking Words
Georgia
Republic has decreased 2.5 times in Correct article usage
the Georgia
Covid-19
period. Correct article usage
the Covid-19
Additionally
, Linking Words
this
is definitely because of the decline in Linking Words
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tourism
toursim
industry as during lock-down borders were closed and Correct article usage
the toursim
Geordia
had lost its main source of budget.
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Georgia
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
on the other hand
, some Linking Words
touristic
countries face many problems, especially during their Replace the word
tourist
tourism
season. Sometimes it becomes hard to control people whose goal is just to relax. Research conducted by Law faculty of Harvard Use synonyms
university
showed that crime rates in London during winter(which is touristic peak) exceeds a lot that was observed over other seasons of the year. Change the capitalization
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
majority
of those who did not obey the laws were people with touristic Correct article usage
the majority
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.
To conclude, in my Fix the agreement mistake
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opinion
countries need a strategy of how to handle Add a comma
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with
tourists, but it is obvious that advantages that propose Change preposition
apply
tourism
is much bigger than Use synonyms
negative
sides. Correct article usage
the negative
Moreover
, it is one of the most considerable ways Linking Words
for
improving multicultural relations.Change preposition
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