In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do agree or disagree?

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the destructions around us.

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, thanks to massive technological development, we have made in every field, now it is easier for people to perform some actions just to improve some areas and get perfection. Today, man has created a wide range of modern

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we have overwhelming technological resources to relieve the sufferings of many, so it should be taken into a consideration. To elucidate, we should get our priorities and necessities right. As far as the layman is concerned, the results of the space expenditure are negligible.From my

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we should direct our whole attention to our earth and take care of it rather than destroying other ones.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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extraterrestrial colonization
space exploration
technological innovation
sustainable living
environmental degradation
celestial bodies
astrobiology
international collaboration
economic stimulus
STEM education
overpopulation
resource depletion
scientific discovery
habitable planets
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