You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Hi Tommy, How are you doing? I just want to let you know that I just changed apartment

last

week Friday, I couldn't reach out to you earlier because I was really busy with the movement.

This

new house is superb, it's a 2 bedroom flat all ensuite and it

also

has a large living room with a visitor's toilet attached to it. The kitchen is quite spacious and you have lots of

cabinete

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cabinets

cabinet

for putting all the kitchen wares. On the outside, it has a very large garden and I am now planning to plant some nice flowers inside it.

Finally

, there are so many things to still describe

about

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the house, but I know if you can come around

then

you will see it

first

hand. So would you like to come around by

week Friday? I know you will need a lot of time to pack and get ready, but why not, take your time and let me know when you can come around. Nice chatting with you and hope to read from you soon. Best wishes, Rotimi

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