Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
Recent research findings confirm that numerous individuals who have committed crimes in the past, despite they have been held at
prison
in the long run, trend towards crime again after they are released. I believe, exploring the causes of Add an article
a prison
the prison
this
problem can assist in finding suitable
solution to resolve it.
Facing financial problems could partly Add an article
a suitable
accounts
for committing more and more crimes by criminals when they are released from jail. These people have not carried out any normal career and do not have any specializations. Change the verb form
account
Furthermore
, there are several employers who decline to recruitment
these persons that Replace the word
recruit
stems
from Change the verb form
stem
lack
of reliability. To address Correct article usage
a lack
this
issue, governments should provide them some
educational courses at prisons with authoritative certifications. Add the preposition
with some
In addition
, developing a numbers
of jobs’ opportunities could be effective in showing other people that they return to normal life. Correct the article-noun agreement
number
For example
, I know a restaurant that is
administered by prisoners who are released and other individuals get along with them.
Suffering from some emotional and psychological disease can also
explain why some persons keep their disapproved behaviors
even after liberation. Change the spelling
behaviours
For instance
, there are individuals who acting
out Change the form of the verb
act
the
aggressive Correct article usage
apply
behaviors
with their families or others and Change the spelling
behaviours
annoyed
them. Since they have not been treated, there is more likely to commit another offence. To remedy Wrong verb form
annoy
this
situation, Add an article
a psychologist
the psychologist
psychologist
should have been made available in prisons’ medical Fix the agreement mistake
psychologists
centers
to help Change the spelling
centres
these person
. I think, from a social standpoint, If they are not been cured, would be Change the determiner
this person
these people
more
destructive Add an article
a more
the more
person
.
To conclude, even though lack of suitable job and convenient treatment Fix the agreement mistake
people
instead
of punishment contribute
to criminals keeping offence, authorities can remedy the situation. In my opinion, teaching convenient careers and psychological treatment are steps in the right direction.Change the verb form
contributes
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...