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It is becoming more and more difficult to scape the influence of the media in our lives. Dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays. when
life
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 runs at high speed, and persons need to be according to that, it is not easy to ignore the power of social
media
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. For some human beings take into account advertising data, is very important when making significant decisions. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a society with high use of means and how that influence individuals
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.
to begin
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 with, it is well known that
media
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 has invaded the current society, the increase of its development goes hand in hand with the growth in technology, even more, when humans believe it has made their
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 easier. Any kind of job requires
media
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 technology to improve its performance.
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, big companies in my country
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 as Carulla, exito, etc, even small entrepreneurs use the
media
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 impact to promote their products, convincing mankind to buy their goods.
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 they increase their incomes. In fact. influencers have good profits just using websites like Facebook, Instagram, etc to control the preference of others.
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, living in the middle of a
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-rich society, when there are too many figures available, when there is not a discriminated target, a person can get confused, and can not obviate the details they receive through tv programs, social networks ads at the time of taking decisions. Unfortunately, for some customers, there is
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 a fake direction that can make them take wrong determinations. To sum up, I believe that the advantages of the power of global
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 over people
life
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 far outweigh the disadvantages. when a person is exposed to tons of free data through different
media
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, they have more opportunities to make a decision that impacts their
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