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fddfds yi dfkldo dlddod hdodod oshei hsosh hosdf slso hsoeih d hdosfe oeh odf hto a bfsdk fodfjie taoeh oei

#fddfds #yi #dfkldo #dlddod #hdodod #oshei #hsosh #hosdf #slso #hsoeih #hdosfe #oeh #odf #hto #bfsdk #fodfjie #taoeh #oei
Dear............, I am writing
this
 letter to express my
happyness
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happiness
of
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 your performance
last
 night. It made me feel excited and energetic.
Firstly
,
your
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you're
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 performed like a professional pianist and
this
 took me to my deep memories with my girlfriend. I was able to remember all situations that happened when we were together.
Secondly
, I am a music lover and
pracitioner
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practitioner
 too.
Although
 I did not
studied
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 music formally, I have the talent to play the piano and emulate the top talented performers. The
first
 time I used a piano was when I was 12 years old.
Finally
, I will appreciate your help if you gave me a little bit of your time so can I develop my style of playing and become celebrate one day. It is my only hope. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible and I will be
thankfull
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thankful
. Yours, Hussein
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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