Over consuming sugar is unhealthy .Some people think that the government should take responsibility to control it.Others think that individuals should take responsibility for their sugar intake.Discuss both views and give your opinion .Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important to keep our healthy, on the other side some researchers have proven that consuming

sugar

in higher portions rather than what our body needs is unhealthy.

While

some believe that

this

issue should be taken by the

government

to control by regulation, I would agree with those who argue that

this

sugar

consumption

limitation must be handled by individuals. Considering

firstly

on the negatives if the responsibility has been taken by the

government

. Once there is a rule that limits the

sugar

intake of any citizens that live around the country's area, it will be not effective in controlling

this

issue.

This

is because

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sugar

has been widely used not only in beverages but

also

as

ingredient

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an ingredient

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of cook.

For instance

, in every home, particularly in Indonesia mostly all mothers cook any cuisines with

sugar

,

such

as

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rendang and gulai,

then

if the

sugar

consumption

is limited, it will impact to those who usually use the

sugar

as a recipe. The argument goes that if

people

are in

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to control

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this

sugar

intake,

then

it will not be obeyed comprehensively.

However

, I believe allowing

people

to choose how much

sugar

hey

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need with the healthy campaign by the community about good physical condition is the only way to acquire awareness. The reason for

this

is that

people

cannot be forced by any regulations,

instead

, it should be from their own sense to make any rule effective.

For example

, the rule to use a helmet

while

riding a motorbike will be obeyed by

people

if they know the consequences when an accident happens.

As a result

,

people

's awareness will increase about the danger of

sugar

consumption

in overdose and even they will spread

this

information to their families.

Conversely

, if the

government

's law of

sugar

utilization is enforced in society,

then

people

will not satisfied with the

government

. In conclusion,

although

it is of critical importance to keep healthy by limiting

sugar

consumption

that can be regulated by the

government

, I feel that it should be

people

's consciousness to do so on the basis that

this

will give them the motivation to fit their

body

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.