Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

It is often argued that it is crucial for individuals to be tidy in their workplace and in their house and everything should be organized in these places. I think it’s a correct belief and I advocate

this

opinion. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

Firstly

, it is recommended to be tidy and put everything in its correct place due to find them easily and being neat gives

people

a sense of peace so they can work properly.

In other words

, if

people

have a determined place for their objects, they won’t lose them and it is not needed to waste their time

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finding them.

For instance

, it had happened for many

people

to lose their stuff and they couldn’t find them when it is needed and

this

causes the

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of frustration in them and they have to dedicate a plethora of time to find them or if they are in hurry they have to buy a new one.

secondly

, being neat gives a sense of confidence and

people

can truth on organized

people

more than someone who is messy.

moreover

,

people

think highly of someone with an acceptable appearance because being neat make a positive sense in other

people

and every

people

appreciate

this

kind of manner.

For example

, if we go to an office and we see two employees we prefer to rely on someone who has a clean table and everything has organized in his section rather than an employee with a messy table. In summary, it’s a good manner to try to keep everything in its place because not only can it have a positive effect on our work, but

also

it can attract the other

people

truth and I completely appreciate

this

way of

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.