In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, there is a trend of post-graduate students continuing to share their

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despite being employed. Even though

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have some disadvantages, I believe that it would be better for youngsters to stay in their parent’s house after they got a job. There are two main merits of letting graduated students t

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ive with their

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, it helps to reduce the expenditure on housing for young

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. In many countries, the cost f

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a living place can be quite costly.

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, affording a house can have a negative impact on the financial background of youngsters. They will have to restrict their spending on other needs

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as food and transportation, and their living standard will decrease significantly. Staying with their parent seems to be a suitable choice for y

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have a sustainable salary, as they won’t have to pay the r

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fees, and can have more time to get a better income.

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will make it easier for them to look after each other. Elders have a high demand for close relationships and healthcare, while young

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are usually stressed out with their daily life. Staying close will help

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and their children to support each other better in their life, and r

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faster if there any emergency situation h

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or having severe depression. Admittedly, there is a drawback to

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trend. Sharing

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with their parent for too long will make youngsters become lazy and dependent. They will lose their motivation to devour for a better salary as their l

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being supported by their

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, if there are strict regulations in sharing

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be brought out,

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as forcing the children to leave when they are old enough,

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problem will be fixed. In conclusion, young

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sharing

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with their

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can have a risk of triggering their laziness, but the benefits from

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very noticeable