Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make a greater contribution to society should be paid more than sports athletes and entertainment stars. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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a controversial topic in many parts of the work. In my opinion, I totally d

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disagree

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statement.

Firstly

, raising the salary for a particular job area will cause an imbalance in the

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More people will be attracted to

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igher payment and some other fields will be left abandoned.

This

movement will be extremely harmful to the e

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growth of the country, as their income r

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on many sources, including the entertainment, transportation and service industry.

Moreover

, when professional jobs became popular, the quality of the

workers

in

this

field will decrease. It is impossible to maintain a perfect standard for a large group of employees, but when it comes to teachers or doctors, we want them to be the most experienced, the most s

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because their impact on our

society

would be extremely dramatical.

Furthermore

, looking from the aspect of morality, it is unfair to other jobs if professional

workers

always have a better wage than them. Humans are different individuals, we have different gifts, different dreams, different personalities that fit different jobs. Each person should be rewarded d

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on the amount of effort they p

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their work, not what work they are doing. Provided that they are contributing greatly to t

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society

with their job, and doesn’t commit illegal actions during the process,

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they should receive a better salary than the others. In conclusion, raising the payment for professional

workers

like doctors or teachers only bring negative impacts to t

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society

, and it is best to maintain a fair wage for every job